What's wrong here...
[Something rubs me the wrong way here... what is it? If I told you this was taken from a real magazine, would you say this is a current magazine? Would it be successful today? Please leave a comment with your observations.]
Business Management magazine brings businessmen respected advice, valuable references, and insightful features so your business can succeed.
From the cover of our September issue:
Business Management
[what really matters to businessmen] September Issue
- The 7 secrets of focused businessmen (They'll really help!)
- How to prevent the next audit error
- Employee Perks? Write-ups? (Strategies that work on wives too)
Inside our September issue:
- The real businessman's guide to employees and filing
- The hidden hazards in business: One businessman's story
Two free gifts are available for the enjoyment of businessmen who subscribe to Business Management magazine.
Fluffy Gerbil Management magazine brings pet-owners respected advice, valuable references, and insightful features so your gerbil can succeed. From the cover of our September issue:
Gerbil Management
[what really matters to owners of fluffy gerbils] September Issue
The 7 secrets of focused gerbil owners (They’ll really help!)
How to prevent the next pet audit error
Pet-Owner Perks? Write-ups? (Strategies that work on fluffy housecats too)
Inside our September issue:
The real pet-owner's guide to gerbils and fluffiness
The hidden hazards in pet care: One gerbil-owner's story
Two free gifts are available for the enjoyment of pet-owners who subscribe to Fluffy Gerbil Management magazine.
Am I close? -- David
Comment by David Lechnyr — 09/29/2004 8:13 PM
You may be close. Your magazine doesn't rub me the wrong way as the example does, but gerbils are not as ubiquitous as businesses either.
Comment by Michael Moore — 09/29/2004 11:11 PM
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